Review Detail of Lazy_Rapter in Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures
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(chapter 120 at the review of the story) It the best pokemon fanfiction I have ever read to date, there is an amazing world and the pokemon system is ingenious. Like damn potential and stage level is a good way to characterize a good power system. It also in some small way stays loyal with the original games- even though I would make a few changes here and there. However every story have a few downfalls. One thing that keeps on annoying me is the lack of personal problems. I know the arthur has addressed and hinted that the characters will have such a smooth journey, even so I still feel that it is a little lack luster. The main character reason for getting stronger is a mystery and his goals never have true weight. Yes I understand the main character loves pokemon and desires to catch a legendary pokemon but that's it? I personally don't think he has strong motivation and the only reason he MIGHT reach the top because of talent and some plot armor.
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His goal is to explore the world and for that he has to become as strong as he can, so his goal is to explore the world, not to catch a legendary.The real hurdles are going to appear once he starts his journey. He is currently at the equivalent of the starting village, so it's understandable that he has not encountered any real problems, especially since he went out of his way to avoid them.
Yeah the idea of there being no problem is fair enough on the realistic scales, and I have said that you clearly stated that this was how the story would play out. I already stated what I thought of the story and even though I gave it 3.8 stars it more of a 4.2 star story, I just had a slight misconception of the main character.
Azrail93:His goal is to explore the world and for that he has to become as strong as he can, so his goal is to explore the world, not to catch a legendary.The real hurdles are going to appear once he starts his journey. He is currently at the equivalent of the starting village, so it's understandable that he has not encountered any real problems, especially since he went out of his way to avoid them.