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Review Detail of Tracz in Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

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Tracz
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In the first chapters, there was something that caught my attention, about pokemon crises that could attack cities, I thought... um, something different. The attributes panel. I read the fanfic until chapter 120, while I was on chapter 10, I imagined that the protagonist would age, and start the journey at 14.15 years old with a normal reader mindset. I've lost patience, which seems like the protagonist at 4 years old (even the year, consisting of 36 months, it's kind of impossible to imagine a child as an all-powerful than your parents , it gets to be annoying to read). The MC system is boring because it's so strong. I understand the part of reading the attributes is interesting. Because of the protagonist owning in independent space. He just literally starts by asking pokemons if they want to enter. In the story he even raps pokemon for talent, am I the only one who found this totally bizarre? Just catch the pokemon and throw them in space and probably no longer pays attention. I can even imagine the Protagonist fighting the strongest gyms at 10 years old, the strongest pokemon trainer. Sorry but I can't read this.

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

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Ace20
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Bye

Sin_of_GREED
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thanks for the review as most others r just garbage reviews without any actual review again thanks for the review and saving my time from this p s which "raps" did u mean ???

Tracz
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raps = kidnap ( the little bear) I don't know... the protagonist is quite powerful, and kidnapping an animal. But the story is good, sorry if I was too harsh or rude. Have a good day!

Sin_of_GREED:thanks for the review as most others r just garbage reviews without any actual review again thanks for the review and saving my time from this p s which "raps" did u mean ???