The author is going for a really well fleshed out story, the future of this novel seems bright. The only downside is that it’s extremely slow to the point that he is only 4 years old by chapter ch65. Author often goes day by day and only sometimes skips a few weeks (a year in that world is 3 times as long as well). This results in it becoming an absolute chore to read through the work. Author is too obsessed with making a good background that he totally messed up the flow of the story making it sometimes extremely boring. Which is sad since the stuff he already introduced seems like it would have been extremely fun to read when the mc develops.
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