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Review Detail of OukisLips in Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

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The idea is great, and the world background is very well thought out. But the way this story is written is just soo boring! The story starts out with 20,000+ words of pure info-dumps. I felt as if I was reading a school textbook rather than a story for entertainment. 90% of the information dumped is either entirely irrelevant, or will only become relevant later on in the story, which means it didn't need to be dumped all at once like it was. Idk, maybe some readers will like that, but personally I read fiction to get a break from tedious brain-cramming like this

Pokemon Alternate Universe Adventures

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