the concept of the story is good only that mc is stupid but so stupid that you wonder how the author did to write a mc like this, i read mc as stupid and arrogant but give a gun that can destroy planets, teleport you to the galaxy and protect you always with an op defense to a girl after 1 day for her curvy body, mc is a reincarnated adult with 2 lives! in the story there are also hundreds of xianxia things added like bloodlines and other things like cultivation and various Chinese nonsense that she learned on the internet after filtering on the web wtf really? I understand that you have to make a story but do it well there are many ways to settle the issues and the author makes sure that mc after searching the internet finds a technique to cultivate and learn it without any help after seeing it, the grammar of writing it is not bad (3 stars), stability is ch a day here (3 stars), development for the moment I put 2 stars and I hope to change because for the moment it is horrible, the character 2 stars if he had a normal brain I gave 4 stars, the world is marvel 4 stars at the moment there are few chapters and I hope that when the story continues it gets better sorry for the grammar but i was writing too much to comment and i used GT
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