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SomeoneConcerned
SomeoneConcernedLv132yrSomeoneConcerned

(written at 22nd Nov 2021) First the complements: + the grammar is better than most translations on this site, even when the author isn't using their first language + the update rate is pretty good + if you catch grammar issues on a new issue sometimes the author fixes them up now the bad stuff - while the grammar is better than most on this site it is nowhere near good - the main character has little to no character going from railroaded plot point to plot point. slowly picking up the harem. - almost all "jokes" fall flat and are just references to other media with very little modification. though this is subjective - this is an annoying animal mascot character that goes out of its way to annoy the mc, again subjective. - this is basically a child grooming novel, yes I know it's fiction and nobody gets hurt but it's still wrong: the mc gets a 9 and 10 yr old complements them a bit till they develop a puppy love then proceeds to abandon them with little warning for 6 years (till they legal I'm assuming) the mc r.a.p.e.s. a 15 yr old on an aphrodisiac high, turns out she immediately falls in love due to abandonment, abuse and having her parents murdered, only for him to ditch them, as an AN says, "it had to be done". A love interest and main heroine is his foster daughter he literally saw hatch. this is all till around chapter 40, and I'm assuming it gets worse as there are still more harem members before they get to the school arc.

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Berserk Stick System

Zontal_Zev

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Zontal_Zev
Zontal_ZevAuthorZontal_Zev

I need to tell you guys, there's no Yuri here. Or anything related to LGBT. I don't know where you got that conclusion from.

NotYourCat:really man? thanks man... I almost fallen to the trap
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3Zzz_808

there is still yuri who makes this disgusting

NotYourCat
NotYourCatLv11NotYourCat

really man? thanks man... I almost fallen to the trap

Zzz_808:there is still yuri who makes this disgusting
Zzz_808
Zzz_808Lv3Zzz_808

Yes, you can try if you're still curious, but I'm sick of those things, I always tell the truth not a fake joke like other people who want to trap new readers.

NotYourCat:really man? thanks man... I almost fallen to the trap
Zontal_Zev
Zontal_ZevAuthorZontal_Zev

I need to tell you guys, there's no Yuri here. Or anything related to LGBT. I don't know where you got that conclusion from.

Zzz_808:there is still yuri who makes this disgusting
Zontal_Zev
Zontal_ZevAuthorZontal_Zev

should i show the mushoku tensei which started as a child? even mc has started at the age of 5 years.

Zontal_Zev
Zontal_ZevAuthorZontal_Zev

You just set a trap because there's no yuri here.

Zzz_808:Yes, you can try if you're still curious, but I'm sick of those things, I always tell the truth not a fake joke like other people who want to trap new readers.
yb48
yb48Lv13yb48

lah kamu orang indo ya

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