At some point the MC becomes a puppet of the intelligence agency and other than accepting that there's no other emotion. Takes getting bent over way too calmly.
MaxwellKHA
Liked it!
LIKEAlso no kingdom building, MC is too much of a tool right now. The author forgot MC has a SYSTEM! So how the fuck does it stop working when his tablet gets taken away???? They could communicate perfectly before until he used a tablet as a medium. This is a system for God sakes. Story went off the rails when the intelligence agency tortured his ass and somehow transferred his spirit to a clone body, he can't fucking communicate with his system without the tablet now. God this is infuriating sabotage if one's own work.
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