I like the story a bit although there are inconsistencies in the story the characters aren't bad but they could use some the only real big issue that I have with the story are the repeating of chapter later on that's the only big issue I have come across. Minor issue being that it doesn't feel like the MC is really having developed as a character in the story. Still I would come back to read this story at a later date and hope these issues get fixed.
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