Review Detail of kidd17 in The Innocent Desire

I like you describing the lead character here, but I think, you should ad more a little conflict that the lead character has some a little cracking feeling towards James, like lead character has some competitive. Like his ex maybe, or someone else more 'perfect' than the lead character. There are a lot of words I don't know, but I think this story has a potential among teenagers like me. It's nice to see read this!