Review Detail of BLACKYTHEDOG in Apocalypse: Living with a Cute Baby

Your female lead is a lovesick pregnant woman. I can't attempt to read further after reading how she is too blind. I don't know what kind of standard that can be considered as a 'good' huband who prioritize his wife because im not gonna let this go. And it would be good if you show those missions you are talking about. Give some details of the space. If its have this farm like vibes or have a lot of tress or a vast land with green grass on it or a vast land with a boundary smoke like things? Just dont relay of your readers own imagination just because you just mention it as a land or as house, that's why this is a book because we need to relay to the authors description and imagination to make the readers imagination be as clear as what you really are telling in your words. it won't work just to be lazy in describing things because obviously this is not a picture book. The wooden house should be given some detailed information about what style or what it should look not just 'wooden house' i get it its made of wood but what does it looks like? And you clearly overworking your pregnant character. At least put some a little bit care to herself and let her act like she should slowly get things work, not exhausting exhausting her. And what's this in and out of the space? Its too lousy if you ask me. Its like describing a hand, like 'a hand with 5 fingers and the other is the same' you get me? It's boring in that part. Just make things work like a fantasy but have a little bit of logic in it. It's giving me a ridiculous vibes whenever you keep skipping some parts and no describing that is happening.