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Today I'm tired so I wont leave as detailed a review as I normally do. The main problem with this book is that it is painful to read. It is not emotionally painful to read, and not badly written painful to read. It is 'why the hëll did THIS happen?' painful to read. Like I said, I'm tired, don't wanna explain much, so I'll give just one example. MC is born again in a disgüstingly mütilated body. Fine. Young master is törturing her. Okay. Wants her to get räped. Fine. Lacky comes in, thinks she's too disgüsting. Okay. Young master gets distracted. MC tries to escape. The 'loyal' servant of the MC UNEXPECTEDLY shouts when he sees she's escaping, alerting the young master. He'd been watching leisurely btw. And he's loyal, according to the story. I kid you not. All of this is okay. Then there's the system. I don't like how it works. At all. Why 5 stars? Because it's yuri. And the story can improve as it goes on. I'll probably come back to read it once it has more chapters.

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Cough .... Thank you for the review🤗 Welp every story needs a villain and I just introduced them way too sooner kek😂😅oof...lesson learnt. But no matter how long the rain lasts there will be rainbow in the end 😉 Welp, I m glad you are willing to give it a chance later.. then by every means have an equally nice day as you made mine