Review Detail of Promethee in Mutant in Marvel: Mystic Eyes of death perception

There isn't much to say about the story as I wasn't able to go far because of the horrible grammar, I've rarely seen anything as bad as this but I guess the writer is a young child so it's understandable. If I had any tip to give him, it would be to write on grammarly beforehand, just so it would made it readable for anyone, and it would even help him improve on the road of learning this language. Also don't take badly my criticism it isn't made to make you loose your drive to write, as it's by making mistakes that we learn, so continue writing until the point you could make something you could look back at, and feel proud about. Good continuation.