The premise was pretty interesting. The story was definitely enough to get me hooked and wanting more. However, the writing was simply atrocious. I have no idea if it's a translation issue or the author is ESL and is still learning English. Having an editor would help this novel a lot. Or perhaps even some kind of writing assistant to check for grammar and spelling.
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lumydee:🙈🙈Thank you so much for the love. I'm soon thinking of adding an extra editor on my side these days🤩🤩
NPCs:I am an editor too. Incase you need one.
IsekaiLord:naaaah, how did i catch you lacking this bad? You are gaaaaay!image