good story. the only complaint i have is the grammer. kind of hard to tell what is being said and what is the char thinking. and some weird termenology being used. example: the word taste makes an aperiance once in a while withe no contex really confusing
EdwinRBM
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LIKEI'm sorry for that brother, but as I have already mentioned before, my English is very low, I hardly know any English and I use the Google translator which knows nothing of grammar, and where I live I have no one who can help me With the translation, I also wrote to those who hired me and they can't help me either, so that's how the novel will stay.