Review Detail of Demelios in Autophagy

Really good story with developed world background. I don't remember seeing grammars problems. And the uptadatings are quit constant. Only hick is the Mc development: Even after 170 chapters we don't really know a lot about him. Sometime he is a little too perfect. We know what he want to accomplish but he doesn't look like to be in hurry about it. Which make the story slow paced. And more importantly (Spoiler Alert) The dreamscape whole feelings is quite bad. Let me explain. The system which is his Ability is not a lot used since its mostly blocked. Which is ok for me. But in the second DS it's not blocked completely so when he kills ghosts or things like this we should see a [log] from the system which we don't. And because of this it me us think there is not any interaction with the system. And knowing all this. The second dreamscape feel useless except for the Knoledge that he gets. The problems is that there is a LOT of fight scene where he get Nothing from them. Which make it boring. I mean like Buckingham palace... Men arf... Little advice do like The Oracle and its rewarding system. Give points and rewards from his achievements. Ex: Spoiler for The Oracle. In some of his ordeal the Mc is sent in the bodies of others or fake people. When this happen and he do well with his ordeal he can chose some of their special characteristic and send them to himself. Like this what he does seems more useful then a simple level up or just fighting knowledge.