very good all around I thoght the author was being cocky when he said that this is better then most things on this app but he was right the grammar is good no annoy paragraphs were it makes no sense and you don't know what is going on actual character development somethings are left un talked about but nothing super big and the story moves at a good pace updates are good so far hope it continues all around good
Eggcellent
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