webnovel

Review Detail of Uragos in Cycle Of Nirvana

Review detail

Uragos
UragosAuthor2yrUragos

As the first novel I wrote, it will always have a special place in my heart. If you want to travel in a world full of mystery, action, war and development with a leading role that you will love and adopt, you are in the right place.

Cycle Of Nirvana

Uragos

Liked by 12 people

LIKE

Replies9

Niks161
Niks161Lv2Niks161

this is not harem right?

2yr
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15Dreamstrafe

señor, please get an editor.. from the synopsis alone, your grammar sucks

2yr
1
Uragos
UragosAuthorUragos

Thank you for your comment. I am aware that I am bad as a grammer. My mother tongue is not English so I have difficulties in some places. I am trying to improve myself. I hope you don't have the same troubles as you did in the synopsis while reading the story.

Dreamstrafe:señor, please get an editor.. from the synopsis alone, your grammar sucks
2yr
3
Dreamstrafe
DreamstrafeLv15Dreamstrafe

thanks for the reply! also, you've come a long way in learning English, I admire you!

Uragos:Thank you for your comment. I am aware that I am bad as a grammer. My mother tongue is not English so I have difficulties in some places. I am trying to improve myself. I hope you don't have the same troubles as you did in the synopsis while reading the story.
2yr
1
Matt_pike
Matt_pikeLv5Matt_pike

Any romance?

2yr
1
Dieudonner_17
Dieudonner_17Lv5Dieudonner_17

Actually the english gets better

2yr
LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKLv11LORDOFORIGINALINK

Can u take out the last names in every sentence

2yr
1
Uragos
UragosAuthorUragos

I took it out after a while. Thank you for your critique. I think I need things like this.

LORDOFORIGINALINK:Can u take out the last names in every sentence
2yr
LORDOFORIGINALINK
LORDOFORIGINALINKLv11LORDOFORIGINALINK

Just downloaded The app Grammarly It will help u

Uragos:Thank you for your comment. I am aware that I am bad as a grammer. My mother tongue is not English so I have difficulties in some places. I am trying to improve myself. I hope you don't have the same troubles as you did in the synopsis while reading the story.
2yr
Login