Review Detail of Raycast_5 in Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]

The premise of the story, though unoriginal, is always a guilty pleasure of mine, transmigration into a cultivation world with a system, dual cultivation and a harem with r18 scenes, so far so good, nothing amazing, but good comfort food. What I absolutely cannot stand however is the quality of the English in the story. This is Webnovel so I have already massively lowered my expectations, however this is ridiculous. The story not only suffers from typos, but also glaring grammar and syntax errors. Simply put half the time the writing cannot be recognized as English, and even grammarly would not be able to help. The author stated that English is not his first language and I understand that as it isn’t mine either, but he is far off the point of being able to write any story in this language, let alone a Webnovel, so to the author I’ll just say this: please stop writing for now, until your English improves, or get several beta readers and an editor, you trying write this novel with your English level is like a toddler trying to compete in the 100m sprint in the Olympics.