Review Detail of Mortrexo in Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
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Objective review: (chapter 61) Writing quality (1 star): Abysmal, the grammar is as bad as taking a Chinese novel and using google translator on it. I have tried to read but.. The grammar is killing this novel. Stability updates (5 stars): one chapter daily Story development (4 stars): The MC takes over a typical young master body with some of the memories (family and people close to him). But a lot of other memories are being unraveled as the story goes. Thanks to the system is clear that his path to supremacy is settled. Character design (4 stars): Very typical, jade beauty here, jade beauty there. Personalities are decent, MC is confident but a little bit childish. The "Villains" are typical Chinese cultivation bad guys ("How dare you be thrash with no cultivation?You are hurting my... my...*ejem* You are courting death!") I'm always stupefied with these characters, they don't like MC because he has no talent and that's about it. World background (3 stars): The novel for the moment doesn't focus in this. However, the author is unraveling some sects, big families, conflicts and more little by little. Is a good story, it truly is but... The grammar is abysmal. I can't continue to read. I feel like I'm losing English language proficiency while reading this. I mean this message is ringing in my head while reading this. <Ding! -1 English proficiency> <Ding! -1 English proficiency> <Ding! -1 English proficiency> <Ding! -1 English proficiency>
Dual Cultivator Reborn[System In The Cultivation World]
SHIVAM_Chouksey
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I've tried to read again. I reached chapter 127 which is the latest chapter today. The grammar continues the same and the expression "takes a deep breath" is used before EVERY sentence. Anyway, lets talk about the story... *sigh* is good and bad at the same time. It is good because the plot is interesting, keeps you entertained and well, in short, it does the trick. It is bad because the characters are loosing depth. For example, a poison master is attacked and instead of, I don't know, spread poison before his death of their oh so incurable poisons that the MC and FL has been infected, he just starts talking with the guy that has tried to kill him until he dies, so much for the poison master *Heh*. Another example, our FL gets frustrated that she can't hit the grandpa who is FIVE ranks above her in her FIRST spar after TWO hours of sword practice. And the list goes on... You may ask, Is it worth it to read? Or worth to use tickets? I think is worth to give it a try, but, not worth it to waste tickets.
xP_Hero:Chapter 131 is called "Promice". I can't stand to read this anymore kkkk.
Universal_Monarch:but it is how it's spelled 'promice' makes more sense