Review Detail of FieldBear in Tyranny of Steel

This story has sevral good points, such as good grammar and sensible choices made by the MC. One thing I would note is the fixation on only German designs. Given the goal of an colonial empire, it does not make sense to use German designs from the first world war for ships, as they were generally meant to operate close to European shores, i.e. the North Sea. They were not designed to support a far-flung colonial empire. I would have suggested using other nations designs, as they may be more suited to the situation at hand. Will the German designs be effective? Yes, given the advancednatureof the designs, but MC should know of better designs. Hopefully the weakness of the German designs will be rectified in the development of the new designs. This will hopefully be addressed in the future chapters.