Review Detail of Gabriel_Rodrigues_4008 in Tyranny of Steel
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I'm here to leave my honest opinion, I've read for now until chapter 56 and although the construction of this world is cool I'm getting disappointed with the constructions of the characters, a lot of contradiction in a matter of few chapters like, for example, the mother of the mc when she says that she wouldn't allow linde to be with her son and if she had a child she would do anything to separate them or adele who says she wouldn't forgive him if her fiance were with another woman and also chapters later acts totally different, it's these inconsistencies that are discouraging me. I will read some more and if this continues I will be abandoning it, I hope the author is mature enough to understand that this is a criticism of a book and not a personal attack.
Tyranny of Steel
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hmm.... well at that time she didnt expect that hers sons have been trying to kill each other as for adela she's a little kid even if she says she will not allow beren to be with other women what can she do now ? linde is already pregnant and she loves beren enough to not be able to leave him character consistency doesn't mean that they and there thought pattern cant change and slowly be influenced the mother was highly after knowing the attempts to beren life and guilt for ignoring beren thinking that he will die sooner or later so she accepted it as for adela she might be angry feel betrayed but she also feels inferior to linde what are realistically her choices the deed is done she can leave beren but will she? no, not only her parents would not allow it cause of the iron reserves but also because she herself likes beren too much well in the end if you dropped it then its your loss friend and if you didnt change the rating