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Tandoris
TandorisLv32yrTandoris

A bit hard to understand at first but after chapter 2-3 the writting get better , the story have a lot of potential if the story of Wow is well understand and good for that cuz damn azeroth got a lot of stuff and lore writing 3 updates 5 story 5 character designe 4 world background 5 total 4.4 have a nice day <3

Under Black Scales

Madaremius

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Tandoris
TandorisLv3Tandoris

good luck* for that

Madaremius
MadaremiusAuthorMadaremius

yea the first 1-4 was me mostly being how the F**K do i start this story so panic, tons of ideas and less then perfect eng translation efferts made some meh start. Your point of view I am thankful for character designe 4 i now know that i should put a bit more care to my incoming character's thank you and have a nice day as well.

Tandoris
TandorisLv3Tandoris

The chara design 4 is mostly because it's the start of the story and Mc don't really have an objective (except becoming stronger) and is still in his 'growing' period but once he can get out/travel the world and have interaction with all the species of azeroth i supposed it will be easier to mold and develop his character and motivation. Hope it help, i don't have a lot of writing experience so consider it to just be my humble opinion have a nice day <3

Madaremius:yea the first 1-4 was me mostly being how the F**K do i start this story so panic, tons of ideas and less then perfect eng translation efferts made some meh start. Your point of view I am thankful for character designe 4 i now know that i should put a bit more care to my incoming character's thank you and have a nice day as well.
Madaremius
MadaremiusAuthorMadaremius

this is helpful thank you for your opinion

Tandoris:The chara design 4 is mostly because it's the start of the story and Mc don't really have an objective (except becoming stronger) and is still in his 'growing' period but once he can get out/travel the world and have interaction with all the species of azeroth i supposed it will be easier to mold and develop his character and motivation. Hope it help, i don't have a lot of writing experience so consider it to just be my humble opinion have a nice day <3