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Review Detail of GuzaSan in Age of Mecha: Divine-grade Genetic Extraction

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GuzaSan
GuzaSanLv32yrGuzaSan

The translation is good but the story itself just isn't very interesting. The prompt is kind of a post-apocalyptic world where humans fight mutated animals and while humans can become stronger via genetic enhancements the "genetic warriors" are still much weaker than the mechas the humans also use to fight the mutated beasts and thus looked down upon. MC was supposed to be admitted as the first of his class to the mecha course but his spot was taken by some dude who discovered the girl he tried to court actually liked MC (I mean, not further explanation needed right?). So he has the system but hardly uses it, seems to me like he could get infinitely stronger but for some reason, he hardly uses his system (that reason is probably to increase the length of the story). Generally, I don't even blame the author for stalling it out since I really don't see a way this gets beyond 40 chapters without unnecessary drama to make up for the word count because as I said it seems to me that as long as MC was willing he could become invincible in a matter of hours. There is also this extremely generic female childhood friend who is also from a very influential family blah blah blah so from fantasy it became a drama and I don't like dramas so no thanks for me. Wouldn't recommend it.

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kewllewk
kewllewkLv11kewllewk

I'm far more inclined to believe that this is actually a Faloo novel, and so Webnovel is butchering the original plot like it usually does by plopping in random mechanics that never get used to "differentiate" it enough to not get sued. That seems to be the most common reason for nonsensical power scaling in trial reads these days.

Hnn17
Hnn17Lv6Hnn17

thx nice detailed review, one way of extending this to over 40 chaps is to bring in the chinese reaction crowd- they can write a whole novel by themselves

AskAndzar
AskAndzarLv12AskAndzar

Question. The title is age of mecha. What's the relation with the genetic?

GuzaSan
GuzaSanLv3GuzaSan

The main way for the humans to fight against the mutated monsters is with mechas although MC generally doesn't use that so far

AskAndzar:Question. The title is age of mecha. What's the relation with the genetic?
GuzaSan
GuzaSanLv3GuzaSan

MC uses genetic upgrades to increase his physical strength with his system

GuzaSan:The main way for the humans to fight against the mutated monsters is with mechas although MC generally doesn't use that so far
Rhaelbarnes
RhaelbarnesLv14Rhaelbarnes

If author is finding it difficult to prolong the story because the system is unreasonably op , then you can see what he could have changed. Does the system need to give him 100x his strength because he absorbed ant genes ? The answer is no. Author could have easily keeped these number down but webnovel doesn't do any quality check before choosing its trial reads.

GuzaSan
GuzaSanLv3GuzaSan

I agree but I also think messing around with accurate numbers like 100 times and going by kg is also a big part of the problem

Rhaelbarnes:If author is finding it difficult to prolong the story because the system is unreasonably op , then you can see what he could have changed. Does the system need to give him 100x his strength because he absorbed ant genes ? The answer is no. Author could have easily keeped these number down but webnovel doesn't do any quality check before choosing its trial reads.
Joshua_Bialen
Joshua_BialenLv10Joshua_Bialen

mm

R_a_v_an
R_a_v_anLv13R_a_v_an

.. ...adn this got picked 😑🤦🤦

TianYa
TianYaLv5TianYa

thanks

deletedaccount_
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read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.

deletedaccount_
deletedaccount_Lv1deletedaccount_

read Hitman Hitman Garden, you won't be disappointed.

TianYa:thanks
DaoistjgSy04
DaoistjgSy04Lv15DaoistjgSy04

It’s very boring the story has good bones but not worth the coins