Review Detail of flamezdoa in Unrivaled Under The Heaven

If ya didn't already know, google docs has an auto correct feature so you generally don't have to reread if ya use it, if you want to improve your grammar more, do what I suggested and continue writing on webnovel wihout using an app like google docs. Have a fun time writing while also improving.

Also please write in the past tense, it's pretty uncomfortable to read, alsofor the love of god, please capitalize after every period. If you want to write in the present tense, then please do it in the 1st person perspective and not the 3rd person.

Harem?

don't think so, but he would surely have a lover

Did you drop it?

no

would start uploading starting from tomorrow