Review Detail of Brian_Hanes_117 in 无效的

Great story all in all. Great world background. Amazing writing. Fantastic dialogue. It's also a realistic story that shows the flaws of the times and society. The only thing I would suggest is to add more description of how the characters look. Tell me what their hair looks like. Tell me about their skin color and eye color. Tell me about how they're built. Also describe the weather a bit more. Make me feel like I'm there. You did everything else so well, that I won't hold it against you in the review but that is my suggestion. I read the first ten chapters, but for some reason that's not coming up in my review.