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The Story is Good, the update Is very good. The only minus i think is The way how mc got his body since i dont remember mc planning to have a body this early and i dont understand how he got his body?
MHA: The One Within
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What i dont understand is how did he gain a "New body" or "his body" like how?, i mean he is inside izuku body and didnot do any prep for "body" yet so how come he get his body. I remmber that the deal was 20 minjte body turn so how come he get his "Body"?
pinto:understandable, I didn't want to have it to where he would just take over Izuku's, So I made it to where he will just shout out from Izuku's body leaving a hole in his stomach, like I mentioned in the most recent chapter.
Okay, I should probably explain, In a chapter. Kira never really needed to prep for a "new" body. His body was sealed along side his spirit inside Izuku. So, think Nine Tailed fox, but human version, except Kira isn't stored within a seal, He's stored in a domain that was formed inside Izukus body/soul. Kira needed to absorb energy so his body would have enough strength to break the barrier that held him inside Izuku. And when he had enough, boom! Kira's free'd. I added the whole injury thing because I needed something to happen to Izuku so he will have trama I guess.
Unholy_b31n9:What i dont understand is how did he gain a "New body" or "his body" like how?, i mean he is inside izuku body and didnot do any prep for "body" yet so how come he get his body. I remmber that the deal was 20 minjte body turn so how come he get his "Body"?
pinto:Okay, I should probably explain, In a chapter. Kira never really needed to prep for a "new" body. His body was sealed along side his spirit inside Izuku. So, think Nine Tailed fox, but human version, except Kira isn't stored within a seal, He's stored in a domain that was formed inside Izukus body/soul. Kira needed to absorb energy so his body would have enough strength to break the barrier that held him inside Izuku. And when he had enough, boom! Kira's free'd. I added the whole injury thing because I needed something to happen to Izuku so he will have trama I guess.
pinto:understandable, I didn't want to have it to where he would just take over Izuku's, So I made it to where he will just shout out from Izuku's body leaving a hole in his stomach, like I mentioned in the most recent chapter.