Review Detail of AnRa in ONE PIECE :TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND

Item: ONE PIECE :TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND
Rating: 4

Review detail

AnRaLv132yrAnRa

The story is quite interesting, a few thing that i think that you can improve is the uppercase letter, the punctuation and don't make the paragraph to long, the character development should be explored a bit more too in my opinion. Sorry if its a bit weird, i'm not good at english. Thanks for the story by the way, keep up the good work 😁👍

ONE PIECE :TALE OF AN UNPARALLELED LEGEND

godlyarrogantz_305

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godlyarrogantz_305Authorgodlyarrogantz_305

thanks for all the compliments and I'm working on the dialouges and stuff since vol1 fights were too long .thank you for the feedback I'll try to make the story better 😊

2yr

Jean_LeleuLv13Jean_Leleu

Yes, i was about to say the same thing, a bit of editing will make your story more fluid and nice to read. This story is very insteresting and i hope you keep up your good work 👍

2yr