Review Detail of Kono_Timoda in HARRY POTTER: ASCENSION BOOK 1
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For those that are scared that thier is no synopsis: Lily, harry potter's mother, gets in contact with Kryptonian tech and gives harry Kryptonian DNA, changing his personality and changing his course in life. It seems like it's a DC + Harry potter verse. The first chapter is a prologue and is long but it sets the pace for the story. Harry's POV starts in chapter 2 with a 10 year overview and time skip. Th author's writing style holds my interest well and balances world building with character development really well. And I have not been able to spot any errors so 👍👍 (As of chapter 2 🙃) I feel as if this is a hidden gem in the making which can be on par with "meta essence". Good job author and I like the daily updates and can't wait for more.😃
HARRY POTTER: ASCENSION BOOK 1
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I suggest re-reading them, the author doesn't make time skip stamps, he just starts the next seen. It caught me ofguard a couple of times 😅.
Ballad:story is legit missing a bunch of parts like they've been cut offn
Kono_Timoda:I suggest re-reading them, the author doesn't make time skip stamps, he just starts the next seen. It caught me ofguard a couple of times 😅.
Kono_Timoda:I suggest re-reading them, the author doesn't make time skip stamps, he just starts the next seen. It caught me ofguard a couple of times 😅.
Legendary_Gear5:Yeah they are removed, idky but they’re in the ao3 version.