Review Detail of Barnacleboy in Authority of the Gods

I love this auther for his writing quality and is ability to write good dialogue. I also respect the fact that he’s pretty good with us update stability. My issues with this book has to do with the story. It starts with a great concept of naruto going back into time as obito. Great idea!!! But then Naruto is ‘unconsciously’ catching girls like he has a Pokédex to fill. His own mother kushina, is implied at this point to have feelings for obito, who is also naruto. Its also implied that mikoto and kaguya (yes that kaguya) is also also apart of his herem. And as bs and cringe I find all that, as a fan fic reader I have come to learn that every fan fic, as a wish fulfillment book will have something you don’t like that you will need to power though to continue reading. But, my biggest issue is the author demonizing every male character that would usually end up with that girl who will now eventually end up in obitos herem. Minato for some reason has become a manipulative a** that would let kushina be kidnapped so he could save the day and win her heart just so he can be closer to his goal of becoming hokage. Fugaku has become the clan head who wants to marry mikoto because she has deep pockets of cash and it would stabilize his position as head of the uchiha. And I am pretty sure thats how asuma will be portayed since kurenai seems to also be interested in obito. And that bothers me. Good characters with potential are just demonized for the sake of plot convenience so he can have a big herem. And this is all done before hes even 5. Character design is alright since its naruto, apart from the dudes that are demonized and the girls who for some reason get a ‘special feeling’ in there heart the moment they meet with obito. They do seem to act like they would in the show. And the world background is naruto. Its hard to mess up a world like naruto since some information we get in manga and anime conflict with each other and the dates make no sence. So as long as you don’t forget major events, any minor changes to the story or timeline can be shrugged off since the whole show is filled with plot wholes. My final thoughts on this book is that its a great story for those who love herems and hate on previous romantic intrestes of herem members. For those who dont, I recommend giving it a chance since I’ve read this authors starwars book and found that even with all the bs(talking about many times he adds a crossover jusy to boost the character) in that novel he can write a interactive and intriguing story.