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Review Detail of _Evergreen in Be Gentle, Immortal Master

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_EvergreenLv32yr_Evergreen

Well done! The flow of the story is good and the idea was OK. The book had a lot of potential. Though the pace of the story is a bit slow. Besides, there is no information about the stages in cultivation and .... Keep writing, want more. šŸ‘šŸ‘

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Be Gentle, Immortal Master

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Thank you for your feedback! I will make sure to clarify more in the synopsis that cultivation is not the focus of this story. I hope that will prevent future disappointments :)