Review Detail of Nisa_Casiano in Hunters Royale (Old Version, Search for New)

Item: Hunters Royale (Old Version, Search for New)
Rating: 5

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Nisa_CasianoLv12yrNisa_Casiano

I was confused at parts but other than that, I enjoyed the story very much. I really liked the humor mixed in; it made me laugh. I love how this is a story with the potential to become more. Keep it up, author! [img=recommend]

Hunters Royale (Old Version, Search for New)

Sinadin

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Nisa_CasianoLv1Nisa_Casiano

You were very passionate in the way you narrated the story. I loved the jokes and the personalities of the characters but I do suggest toning down the amount of personality (if that makes sense) it gets confusing when everything is so powerful.

2yr

SinadinAuthorSinadin

Thank you!! If you could then please tell me where you found it confusing. it would be a big help.

2yr

SinadinAuthorSinadin

AHH!!. Thank you.

Nisa_Casiano:You were very passionate in the way you narrated the story. I loved the jokes and the personalities of the characters but I do suggest toning down the amount of personality (if that makes sense) it gets confusing when everything is so powerful.

2yr