I was confused at parts but other than that, I enjoyed the story very much. I really liked the humor mixed in; it made me laugh. I love how this is a story with the potential to become more. Keep it up, author! [img=recommend]
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LIKENisa_Casiano:You were very passionate in the way you narrated the story. I loved the jokes and the personalities of the characters but I do suggest toning down the amount of personality (if that makes sense) it gets confusing when everything is so powerful.