Review Detail of Trey_Tucker_0457 in Hunters Royale (Old Version, Search for New)

Item: Hunters Royale (Old Version, Search for New)
Rating: 4.2

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Trey_Tucker_0457Lv12yrTrey_Tucker_0457

I like this book but I ask, that the author spends some time explaining how the world works, ex: does this world have systems for everyone. or can your get new classes for the system, and finally can you show people your system. (the system part is confusing.) if the author can help new people understand what's happening. the book will soar in the rankings.

Hunters Royale (Old Version, Search for New)

Sinadin

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Trey_Tucker_0457Lv1Trey_Tucker_0457

it's nice to see a author who can find faults in their writing. best of luck. and if you need some additional help check out overly sarcastic products' trope talks, they WILL help you on your writing journey.

Sinadin:Yes, I will!! I was soon going to do that as I said it in my latest chapter!!. Haha.. The way the story was progressing you know. I got no space to do anything!!😂😂. Thank you for the review!!.

2yr

SinadinAuthorSinadin

Yes, I will!! I was soon going to do that as I said it in my latest chapter!!. Haha.. The way the story was progressing you know. I got no space to do anything!!😂😂. Thank you for the review!!.

2yr

SinadinAuthorSinadin

Woah Thanks for the advice man!!! Will surely check it out 😄😄😄

Trey_Tucker_0457:it's nice to see a author who can find faults in their writing. best of luck. and if you need some additional help check out overly sarcastic products' trope talks, they WILL help you on your writing journey.

2yr