Review Detail of SOMMO_ARCANO in In MHA with Tatsumaki's Powers!!! (dropped) well remake 6/24/24

the idea of ​​the story was very good but the author sucked, the interactions and dialogues are monotonous and short, the author cannot write the characters seem one-dimensional and repeat the same way of speaking, there is no growth or change in the characters of the mc or those around him it is as if in 16 years he has the same character without ever complaining or anything else, mc comes to be a hero only because he has a good quirk. The story seems forced by the plot both as he discovered and used the his quirk,later in the story quirk get big boost because he forgot to ask god! here's what happens: mc sleeps in the dream god comes and says you forgot to ask me for other powers so I give them to you and god give him a boost that makes mc more op, after it gets boost it says no more suppress powers because they can't be stolen by AFO(god boost), the whole story looks weird and bumpy there are more time jumps in this story than in all time travel in dc and marvel , history follows the canon so much that it seems forced because it is as if it does not exist and its presence does not change, it continues to say that it wants to make friends with everyone but there is no dialogue about what they have in common or why they are close but remain friends when he does nothing, the story is more like mc does this , mc says that all vague without going into the story, it looks more like a summary of the chapter, the mental processes of the characters are strange and irrational the story also looks like a draft because of how it is written and composed I think the author has not re-read his story because there are too many problems it is almost MTL (I was in a hurry so if you find any mistakes in the review please excuse me)