Review Detail of Lazered in The Other Side/Rise of the Crow

Okay, so overall, I feel like this is a great novel. The writing quality is superb, though there might be some places which can have use a more coherent style, and others where some words are repetitive (try using synonyms), but other than that, the english is excellent and the writing is very understandable. judging by the dates when the novel was released, i have nothing to say other than that your consistency is amazing! okay next is story development, and to be honest, even though it's a tiny tiny bit cliche (which is good), it has many unique parts to it, like how when he was transported he wasnt the only one. World background and character design are also good, but i would have giving them 4.5/5 rather than 5 if i could. i cant give 4 because its better than 4 though. good luck, im interested in how this will progress