Review Detail of Stylish_Demon in At the End of the World
Review detail
The story is very good has some potential to earn interst of readers. I loved it but, -Change the cover into attractive one. -Paragraphs have to be short. Cut it and leave gaps. If you want to attract readers the paragraph should only be 3-4 lines no more than that. -Try it write in active voice, there so much passive in the novel. -Lastly, try to leave more details in small things and mainly foucs on the concept or story. -If you have time check out my novel [Legend of Interstellar war]-Silver prize in #212 WPC.
At the End of the World
Crisyah
Liked it!
LIKEReplies2
The novel has been dropped, as it's stated in the synopsis, which is why the cover was removed. Stylistic choices aren't *errors* and just because your preferences lie elsewhere, it's actually harmful to offer too broad advice that doesn't necessarily apply to their genre and voice to new writers (of which, luckily, I'm not one, so I can parse these things). Lastly, reviews aren't the place to advertise your own novel, that's incredibly rude. I would delete the review just for that but, again, since the story is dropped, I've deleted all reviews, anyway.
You could have at least change the title into [dropped], also above mentioned are not my Preferences, it is the basic standard points to make your novel popular or successful. But, it was good I enjoyed it. It's unfortunate that story was discontinued.
Crisyah:The novel has been dropped, as it's stated in the synopsis, which is why the cover was removed. Stylistic choices aren't *errors* and just because your preferences lie elsewhere, it's actually harmful to offer too broad advice that doesn't necessarily apply to their genre and voice to new writers (of which, luckily, I'm not one, so I can parse these things). Lastly, reviews aren't the place to advertise your own novel, that's incredibly rude. I would delete the review just for that but, again, since the story is dropped, I've deleted all reviews, anyway.