Review Detail of Mad_Dog_5938 in At the End of the World

This is rather lacking in overall quality. The diction is poor and lacks any variation, very repetitive. Character development is extremely shallow but greater than the world building so there is that. The story develops a little slow and the conclusion was a bit lackluster. All in all it feels like an attempt at a self insert and a lot of wish fulfillment at the end of the day. Could not recommend this I'm sorry.