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Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv42yrGreat_maid_Oni

Bad writing warning, I use the translator :( . I know the author, Victor, for some time and I know that his works are very good, just by his background I already know that this work would be very good but after I read it I could only confirm my speculations.... But let's stop chatting and let's go to the quality analysis :D . Writing Quality: I really like Victor's writing, yes we can see an error from time to time here or there, but it is very good and it became even better when he got an editor for his stories. At this point I have nothing to complain. . Stability of Updates: well there i have a little grudge with victor, where are my other stories man?? Hahahaha But going back to this story, for now everything is the best wonder, chapters with a good amount of words and daily updates, I hope this continues for a long time. . Chracter Design: Well, if we only see this story he is well done, tells enough about his past and personality so that we can continue the story without having any doubts about his character. Yes, every now and then I think I see a hole here or there in his "slightly" distorted personality, but it's irrelevant and I would be annoying if I let that influence my analysis too much. Now for a personal comment of mine, Victor, don't you think your main characters in your stories are very similar? stay with my question :) . World Background: well, i guess i don't have much to say that just enough was said for the setting of the story, although i would like to see him wandering more around the world.

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My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.

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Mohammed_Ismail_3796
Mohammed_Ismail_3796Lv1Mohammed_Ismail_3796

thanks, this made me wanna read when i planned not to

Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

You can go without fear, it's good to read and it's a lot of fun

Mohammed_Ismail_3796:thanks, this made me wanna read when i planned not to
meimei0621
meimei0621Lv1meimei0621

Agreed

Guan_Yu
Guan_YuLv1Guan_Yu

jo author if u gonna get past the 3 wife title and bring some other girls in his harem tgen whats the point for the title so dont do that THANK YOU and great novel RECOMMEND TO ANYONE TO READ

Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

so far only 3, I've talked to him several times and he's always said it will only be three

Guan_Yu:jo author if u gonna get past the 3 wife title and bring some other girls in his harem tgen whats the point for the title so dont do that THANK YOU and great novel RECOMMEND TO ANYONE TO READ
Guan_Yu
Guan_YuLv1Guan_Yu

if its like that then i wish it could get anime adaptation its such a good storyline ok it needs some little improvements here and there but its a masterpiece love everything about this novel [img=update]

Great_maid_Oni:so far only 3, I've talked to him several times and he's always said it will only be three
Gojusensi_441
Gojusensi_441Lv4Gojusensi_441

yo Chinese man how ya doing china mighty i found your reply to me but can't see your comment i don't know whether xi jinping canceled me ? lol boy

meimei0621:Agreed
Folashade_Ojelabi
Folashade_OjelabiLv1Folashade_Ojelabi

very very amazing book I just can't get past chapter 34 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

well, everyone has their opinion

Folashade_Ojelabi:very very amazing book I just can't get past chapter 34 [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]
Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

he was commenting and erasing several times, he also did this to me

Gojusensi_441:yo Chinese man how ya doing china mighty i found your reply to me but can't see your comment i don't know whether xi jinping canceled me ? lol boy
Jude_K_1656
Jude_K_1656Lv10Jude_K_1656

Hi. Actually, using translator is not that bad though nothing's perfect in any of those. That's why never rely on it, you still need to edit your own writing. :)

Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

yes, despite using it I try to write correctly kkkk I know it is not the most reliable medium to get the message across but it is the only medium available.

Jude_K_1656:Hi. Actually, using translator is not that bad though nothing's perfect in any of those. That's why never rely on it, you still need to edit your own writing. :)
Jude_K_1656
Jude_K_1656Lv10Jude_K_1656

Aside from translators, you need grammar checker... try Ginger, I go for it compared to some ahead... :)

Great_maid_Oni:yes, despite using it I try to write correctly kkkk I know it is not the most reliable medium to get the message across but it is the only medium available.
Zheren
ZherenLv13Zheren

I think Scathatch has been added. Maybe even the other crazy mother in law.

Great_maid_Oni:yes, despite using it I try to write correctly kkkk I know it is not the most reliable medium to get the message across but it is the only medium available.
Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

yes apparently Scathach will be added soon, the other one i'm not really sure

Zheren:I think Scathatch has been added. Maybe even the other crazy mother in law.
NotPerfect
NotPerfectLv12NotPerfect

love everything about the book and when am reading it I feel like am at peace to thank u and I hope good luck in future problems

Astral_Trinity_2449
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I want to ask whether mc is a simp or not and do the women even have *ex with him

64bites
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Scatchaheudjcbjedidjs too (Ruby's mother)

Great_maid_Oni:so far only 3, I've talked to him several times and he's always said it will only be three
Great_maid_Oni
Great_maid_OniLv4Great_maid_Oni

Yeah, by the looks of it she's there joining the team

64bites:Scatchaheudjcbjedidjs too (Ruby's mother)
Patrik_Crown
Patrik_CrownLv12Patrik_Crown

I think if main characters are similiar it's only fine if they are good developed and have interesting background. If it work in other stories and these characters were funny or have interesting powers it's actualy can work. Of course these characters can't be same but if they are similar I think it's ok. Just my opinion. BTWay this story is incredibly good, I love it... 🦇🩸🧛‍♂️🧛🖤