Review Detail of Prognastat in My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
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The characters so far have all been interesting, fun and engaging. The updates have been regular. Story in intriguing and has been developing well so far keeping me interested in what's to come. Only reason I didn't give the world 5 stars is just that there hasn't been enough time to flesh it out yet meaning so far it's been good, but not enough to say if it will become amazing, just stay good or become less good. Definitely interested in learning more about the world though.
My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
Victor_Weismann
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Umu, I know I shouldn't say this about my own work, but I don't intend to do something that will revolutionize the reading industry or anything like that, I'm just a new author, just trying to make something interesting... Unlike other novels, this one here I thought I'd make the characters more 'alive', they're interesting, and the reader cares about them... After all, if you look coldly at my novel, you'll know it's quite cliché. A man was normal, until something happens that changes his life, a basic cliche, but I took that cliche and made something I like. Interesting characters, and basic world plot, and Yandere of course. This is just a novel for you to enjoy... Umu. Tired of seeing novels where the character is 8 or 80, they never have a middle ground or a gray area., I know that's a hit, but meh. Btw, thanks for the review, and I hope you enjoy the new chapters.
No problem. It's good to have a vision and execute on it successfully and I would say you have. You mention focusing more on the characters and I agree that what I've loved most so far has been the characters and also the way they interact with each other. They've been distinct and interesting making me want to know more about them which is a very strong foundation. I know you've just started so it's hard to establish the world very clearly right off the bat, even more so when you've been focusing first and foremost on the characters. Hope that the characters and their relationships stay strong while we also get to learn more about the world around them and how they interact with it.
Victor_Weismann:Umu, I know I shouldn't say this about my own work, but I don't intend to do something that will revolutionize the reading industry or anything like that, I'm just a new author, just trying to make something interesting... Unlike other novels, this one here I thought I'd make the characters more 'alive', they're interesting, and the reader cares about them... After all, if you look coldly at my novel, you'll know it's quite cliché. A man was normal, until something happens that changes his life, a basic cliche, but I took that cliche and made something I like. Interesting characters, and basic world plot, and Yandere of course. This is just a novel for you to enjoy... Umu. Tired of seeing novels where the character is 8 or 80, they never have a middle ground or a gray area., I know that's a hit, but meh. Btw, thanks for the review, and I hope you enjoy the new chapters.
I'm the one who sins, thank you. Thank you so much for doing an honest review, now I know I have to focus a bit on the world around me once the characters are well established. Initially, I planned Volume 1 to introduce the important characters in the story, Volume 2, I will focus more on developing the world, of course, I will try not to put the characters aside while focusing on developing the world.
Prognastat:No problem. It's good to have a vision and execute on it successfully and I would say you have. You mention focusing more on the characters and I agree that what I've loved most so far has been the characters and also the way they interact with each other. They've been distinct and interesting making me want to know more about them which is a very strong foundation. I know you've just started so it's hard to establish the world very clearly right off the bat, even more so when you've been focusing first and foremost on the characters. Hope that the characters and their relationships stay strong while we also get to learn more about the world around them and how they interact with it.