Review Detail of Kindread4440 in My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
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Ok here's my review! So: first for the speed-runners TLDR: I really like it, I think it has lots of potential and room for growth, and I think his abilities, the world background, the vampires themselves, the Church, all of it, has a lot of potential to be expanded on and I could definitely see this become one of my favorite stories on the site (yes, even if it were to be contracted.) Writing Quality: No problems here. The grammar feels smooth, no spelling mistakes (maybe a few but you get the point), and the chapters read smoothly and make sense. Stability of Updates: Well, so far, its been 1 chapter a day, so no problems here either. Hopefully in the future, there could be more chapters a day (2?!!!) and stay at least a chapter a day Story Development: The plot is developing at a reasonable pace, and I hold much anticipation for the future. Character Design: The characters feel alive. Usually, when the MC gets supernatural abilities, 2 things happen: A) Parents? Who are they? What parents? or, B) Parents? Oh yeah! Perfect thing for some character development and then boom! Who are they again? This story makes the parents feel involved and like living beings, alongside the actual main character(s), that can make good and bad decisions, purely emotional decisions, rational decisions, etc. World Background: Oh boy, am I excited for more chapters. Mainly because of this (and the 3 wives. Emphasis on 3, and yandere O_O) The MC's abilities that could totally be expanded on, the noble vampires' abilities, even the plebeian vampires could become something much more in this story. The Church can also become very interesting to the story as well due to a plethora of ideas and things that can be developed later on. All in all, I recommend you give it a try! What's not to love? There's cute waifus, vampires, ACTUALLY EXISTENT PARENTS, action, mystery, intrigue! I look forward to see how it develops O_O
My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires.
Victor_Weismann
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Crying with happiness, thank you so much for the honest review, the grammar credit goes all to my editor, "IsUnavailable". Without him, I couldn't make this fluid romance, why? Because I'm not native English, and he helps me a lot to make things flow, he's a gem that I'm happy to have around. I've always had mixed feelings about these MCs that suddenly become something else and they change in a snap, they forget about parents, friends, family, etc. everything! I don't plan on doing this. Without our parents, we wouldn't be what we would be today, I think parental development is very important to the story. That leaves the update... It is currently impossible to post two chapters a day with more than 2k words and maintaining the quality of writing, after all, it is a much longer process than usual, I need to translate the novel from my language to English, and edit some things in English, to have my editor proofread 3 times. It's hard work. I have a lot planned for Novel, I hope you like it.
Theres a childhood friend who’s a werewolf whos in love with him, and Ruby’s mom who should absolutely 100% be in the harem
DreDASensei:is it only those three wives and are they all vampires, like aren't there more races right? I'm just now getting into it so I don't know much other than how relatable his mother is to me on a embarrassing level.
Zackaroo:Theres a childhood friend who’s a werewolf whos in love with him, and Ruby’s mom who should absolutely 100% be in the harem
author why can't i get accept in your discord server?? whenever i try to get verify by hcaptcha it always bringing me back. even tho i always choose the right image it's not like I'm an idiot to choose the wrong image
Victor_Weismann:Crying with happiness, thank you so much for the honest review, the grammar credit goes all to my editor, "IsUnavailable". Without him, I couldn't make this fluid romance, why? Because I'm not native English, and he helps me a lot to make things flow, he's a gem that I'm happy to have around. I've always had mixed feelings about these MCs that suddenly become something else and they change in a snap, they forget about parents, friends, family, etc. everything! I don't plan on doing this. Without our parents, we wouldn't be what we would be today, I think parental development is very important to the story. That leaves the update... It is currently impossible to post two chapters a day with more than 2k words and maintaining the quality of writing, after all, it is a much longer process than usual, I need to translate the novel from my language to English, and edit some things in English, to have my editor proofread 3 times. It's hard work. I have a lot planned for Novel, I hope you like it.image
