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iappo
iappoLv112yriappo

I'll change my review if this novel gets any better. This novel is pretty awful, full of various plot holes, boring and predictable characters, conceited mc who wants to pretend that he's low-key, lazy mc, wasteful mc, and various common-sense scenarios where the mc doesn't follow such common sense. Cons: First ~ there are inconsistencies in number values as well as significant inconsistencies in regards to the function of the mc's talent/skill thing. Second ~ mc knows about an impending crisis, yet he has no sense of urgency and seems content with strolling around. Third ~ the mc has 30 years of experience with the game, yet he only uses it as a basis for why the things he does are significant. He has yet to use it to showcase any skill or ability he may have picked up in 30 years. This novel wouldn't change if he didn't have these "30 years of experience" because he attends a school that teaches him everything he needs to know about the game. Fourth ~ the mc carries with him the guise of wanting to be low-key, but he takes almost every opportunity to show off that he can. Fifth ~ the mc does not want his time wasted, yet willingly wastes his time in situations where he could save it. Ex: he goes to a high-class restaurant in garbage clothes and gets into an argument with an employee. He could have bought an outfit before going to the restaurant because he was the one who invited his friend and there were no time restrictions. Sixth ~ he had previously named his character in the game "Dirt" to show that he was insignificant. In the new timeline, he named himself "God Slayer" Why? No reason, he's just so low-key, Isn't he? Seventh ~ the mc treats almost all of the people around him as trash while raising himself on a pedestal. He frequently looks down on people and praises himself for being a good person. He has a disciple that he offloads extra items onto and treats him well, while he ignores his obese best friend Tom. Eighth ~ all of the other characters are as smart as children while the mc is as smart as a high school dropout who was held back for 3 years. This is done intentionally because the author isn't smart enough himself to make the mc seem intelligent in any other way. Ninth ~ the mc has no actual friendships. His best friend Tom has made limited appearances and is left on his own and basically ignored by the mc. He has a business partner whose only purpose is to provide a way for the mc to get money. The mc's disciple is an idiot that only serves the purpose of selling items for the mc. The disciple has done nothing significant and is only a leech. Tenth ~ all of the characters have 2D personalities and are caricatures of reality. Eleventh ~ all of the side characters are only there to make the mc look better and give him benefits he doesn't deserve. Pros: First ~ OP mc's are fun to read about. Second ~ the power creep is more of a charge to insanity. This is ridiculous but I find it funny. Third ~ 3 chapters every day, so far. Fourth ~ it's fun getting mad with everyone else and picking apart the story in the paragraph comments of each chapter. Fifth ~ something to pass the time while waiting for your chicken tendies to finish cooking. All-in-all this novel is bad, but I'm personally just waiting for "Disciple, Don't Cause Trouble, Master Won't Leave The Mountain!"

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iappo
iappoLv11iappo

Dropped, forgot what chapter. Read too much anyways, waste of time.

iappo
iappoLv11iappo

WN really ruined the formatting of this...

Horizon
HorizonLv13Horizon

Sadly even “Disciples don’t cause trouble” turned out on the same level as this story. These recent couple of story batches have been honestly utter garbage with constant story changes abe bad writing. This story and “disciple don’t Cause trouble” started so well until the authors/translator decided to ruin them.