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Review Detail of Joeboon in My Idle Gaming System

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Joeboon
JoeboonLv102yrJoeboon

Extremely mediocre book. It's legible so it's better than a lot of stories on here, but everything else is kind of a mess. Every other sentence ends in an exclamation point to try and create fake excitement. Please stop saying "RUMBLE!" in completely random spots that make zero sense.

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My Idle Gaming System

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MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1MAIDENLESS

yeah i agree that rumble makes no sense

MAIDENLESS
MAIDENLESSLv1MAIDENLESS

its cringe i think

DeejaeSutherland
DeejaeSutherlandLv14DeejaeSutherland

I think the whole rumble thing has to do with the intensity of the point, which most if not all of them are not intense besides the forced murder of his perants from anime of something, and now I really think about it I think the author is a JoJo's fan.