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Review Detail of TheBruhtastic in Undertale: The Ultimate Sans System

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TheBruhtastic
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Hallo it's me The Bruhtastic and TIBIA honest with you i think my story is well not horrible but average? so I give myself a 2/5 because uhhhh well you will know if you read my story, also i finally have a computer!!! so i can write 1/2 chapter a week Yayyyy anyway ill will try my best to write to the bone! have a nice day bruh!

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Undertale: The Ultimate Sans System

TheBruhtastic

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Uhhhhh ok 👌 Bro whatever your say...

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B R U H . . .

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THAT'S HOW YOUR SAY IT (or write whatever...)

TheBruhtastic
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I know that it just that it well for 1 ) The moment i write it i was sleepy and two i *sigh* think that it was not appropriate to just well say a B R U H as you call it BUT in the futures chaps there will be this sort of B R U H ,i was just rating my story as a Author nothing else have a good day :)

BRUH_TIME_TRIO:THAT'S HOW YOUR SAY IT (or write whatever...)
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Hello Bruhtastick I want you to tell that in this story be good wean he was not just a killer machine but have reasons to K I L L somebody...

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Good reason... Ok bye👌

TheBruhtastic:I know that it just that it well for 1 ) The moment i write it i was sleepy and two i *sigh* think that it was not appropriate to just well say a B R U H as you call it BUT in the futures chaps there will be this sort of B R U H ,i was just rating my story as a Author nothing else have a good day :)
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Or I just stupid and don't understand what you're gonna do...

TheBruhtastic
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I know don’t worry about that i was asking the same question in my head when i was thinking of creating this story.He will not be a cold hearted killer( mabe but in very rare stituation),he will have a code of what to do and not do. Have nice day

BRUH_TIME_TRIO:Hello Bruhtastick I want you to tell that in this story be good wean he was not just a killer machine but have reasons to K I L L somebody...
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DUDEEEEE THAT'S COOL. BRUH 😏 🦴 🤍

TheBruhtastic:I know don’t worry about that i was asking the same question in my head when i was thinking of creating this story.He will not be a cold hearted killer( mabe but in very rare stituation),he will have a code of what to do and not do. Have nice day
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TheBruhtastic
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Yeah! And i´m currently writting the next chapter intruducting the system so if you want something to be add you can ask me. like sentient Sustem or not. Have a good day my BRUHDA

BRUH_TIME_TRIO:DUDEEEEE THAT'S COOL. BRUH 😏 🦴 🤍
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And I mean that sistem be like . . . HALF-LIFE that sistem can thinks but sistem didn't GONNA do anything if MC don't say command, but if situation gonna be to dangerous to MC sistem gonna automatically do something that's gonna save him . . . But sistem gonna talk to MC and EVEN THOUGHT TELL PUNS . . . And if this must sistem gonna prompt and suggests to MC . . . AND THAT'S ALL MY BROSKI Bruhtastick . . . B R U H . . . 😏 🦴 🤍 💜

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Forgot to write that if that GONNA be different AU'S that he can have MISSION to stopped HUMAN to do GENOCIDE and even to stop RESETTING constantly or always . . . And if he stopped HUMAN he can relaxed in the this AU or going to another AU. If this story gonna be about different AU'S . . . B R U H . . . 😏 🦴 🤍 💜

TheBruhtastic
TheBruhtasticAuthorTheBruhtastic

I didn’t think of that that is a very interesting idea i will surely add that to the story thanks bruh

BRUH_TIME_TRIO:Forgot to write that if that GONNA be different AU'S that he can have MISSION to stopped HUMAN to do GENOCIDE and even to stop RESETTING constantly or always . . . And if he stopped HUMAN he can relaxed in the this AU or going to another AU. If this story gonna be about different AU'S . . . B R U H . . . 😏 🦴 🤍 💜
TheBruhtastic
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Yeah! And he will not be a system slave And for the help from the system it will be rare and in dire situation but like from exemple if he encounter King multiverse if he do the controle every sans who is weaker than im the system will help to negate the effect BUT if he ever meet error 404 he dead Thank for the idea bruh :)

BRUH_TIME_TRIO:And I mean that sistem be like . . . HALF-LIFE that sistem can thinks but sistem didn't GONNA do anything if MC don't say command, but if situation gonna be to dangerous to MC sistem gonna automatically do something that's gonna save him . . . But sistem gonna talk to MC and EVEN THOUGHT TELL PUNS . . . And if this must sistem gonna prompt and suggests to MC . . . AND THAT'S ALL MY BROSKI Bruhtastick . . . B R U H . . . 😏 🦴 🤍 💜
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Your welcome my BROSKI Bruhtastick. B R U H . . . 😏 🦴 🤍 💜