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WARNING / SPOIL The novel is just amazing, very well written and I find the story exciting but there are still many things that bother me. To begin with: the beginning is really slow I know it's to build the world in which our hero is but it doesn't change anything waiting for more than 25 chapters for it to start to be really interesting I find it a bit much. Then there are some incoherent things in my opinion: Why doesn't Jin use his skill to heal his grandmother, as he did to make her sick? He can make believe anything, in fact they could get out of a lot of situations if he would have just used this ability and this skill is getting better every time he gets stronger. The hero improvement is really slow too, the system is just way too slow and you can't feel the power of the stats. I'm not sure how much I'm going to like it, but it's still a masterpiece. The story is really gripping despite its slowness, and I love to see him with his friends, I really enjoyed this novel, and I highly recommend it.

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Loki’s Successor System

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