Review Detail of SubMortal in Loki’s Successor System

Real Review: Perfect Writing Qualty, Cliff hanger heaven, Perfect everything. except how much leveling up took place. (Author comMented Under my Comment and asked me to read. i don’t have a problem with that.) I LOVE the writing style. The quAlity is perfect, its going to take a lot of out of you to spot a spelling or grammatical erRor. I LOVE THE CHARACTER RELATIONSHIPS AND DYNAMIC. The conversations In this novel feels Alive and fluid in a way. in fact that’s why I countinued reading despite slow Leveling. CLIFFHANGERS. The cliffs are really high and steep. I cOuldn’t stop reading. TROPES AND TONES. The author really outdone him/herself with the themes in this novel such as Betrayal, appearance vs reality, Magical Realism, and More. small fixable probLem (why not 5 starS yet) : This novel has but one problem alone. And that problem is the System Development. There is only a little bit of leveling up as of the first 50 chapters. Not that I have a problem with that at all, I kind of like that. But there are some thIrsty Kids around here Looking for crazy leveling up, and I mean, System is tag here so…yeah. I’m sure that problem would be fixed later. The author was apparently trying to set up other themes so that’s why The mc only gets strong fast after the 50 chapters. you should definitely check this one out. i like it a lot and would continue reading. Review will update as I read more chapters.