I have attempted reading a few novels on this platform before. Most of them end up being only so-so and due to that it's been a long while. I like this story, it's not the most original thing I've read but it does most things well. As far as the grammar and spelling goes it is okay... I notice 3 or 4 errors a chapter but most stories on here have 7+. Could definitely use a proof reader but that is not the nature of this platform. Characters can range all over the spectrum but the primary characters I definitely enjoy and I want to see where they are headed next. The world building is a lot like some other things I've read, which is fine since most people get inspiration from something else they've read. I just hope going forward more worlds can be explored as I consider that to be one of the more unique aspects of the setting. Update speed is great and I get the feeling the author really enjoys writing. I think there's enough potential here for something great. As of writing this, I'm at the latest release of 296. The author has mentioned planning on having there be 500-600 chapters. Where the story sits now I worry that may not be enough but we will see. I'm glad to be here for the ride and sorry if anything in my review comes off as condescending.
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