Review Detail of ArtoriaPendragon_ in Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)
Review detail
Writing Quality: Fine Updating Stability: Good enough Story Development: Way to slow for my liking, and is all over the place. Half the chapters are based in the past, and we don’t even see our mc in the current time until like chapter 30. I want to read about Harry Potter/MCU, not random backgrounds I don’t care about. I don’t even understand what is happening 90% of the time, which makes it annoying and a chore to read. Character Design: The mc is boring, not all that likeable, and forgetable (Considering I can’t even remember her name, or really anything other than her becoming Deaths pet). World Background: MCU and Harry Potter but more confusing, Random characters are thrown in, confusing timeline that makes little sense and isn’t really explained (like at all). Half the characters are Oc’s that I don’t care for at all. There’s more chapters on other characters than on the mc herself (I only read up to chapter like 30-40). Overall: It all matters on taste, you’d have to read it yourself to really decide. Don’t let my review stop you. I just suggest the author makes it less confusing and stops with the unnecessary Oc’s, as it gets really boring to read after a while. like, I like slow stories, but this is a bit much, even for me (someone who’s read 2500+ fanfics). I’d also prefer if the mc was fleshed out more. But the thing I would like to see the most, is far less flashback chapters, as they just aren’t at all fun to read. And introduces characters i’ll forget about in an hour.
Magical Marvel (HP X MCU)
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Forgot to mention that we don’t have any sort of mention on who the love interest is, or what the sexual orientation of the mc is. (They probably had that revealed way later though, or I just forgot). But that can also be a huge turnoff, and personally, I don’t like reading straight female mc fanfics. I Also find it incredibly irritating when the author refuses to tell you the sexual orientation of the mc, and tells you to “read further” like, I literally don’t care, I want to know so I don’t waste my time on a fanfic i Will dislike.
ArtoriaPendragon_:Forgot to mention that we don’t have any sort of mention on who the love interest is, or what the sexual orientation of the mc is. (They probably had that revealed way later though, or I just forgot). But that can also be a huge turnoff, and personally, I don’t like reading straight female mc fanfics. I Also find it incredibly irritating when the author refuses to tell you the sexual orientation of the mc, and tells you to “read further” like, I literally don’t care, I want to know so I don’t waste my time on a fanfic i Will dislike.
Not really, and even after asking the author multiple times they never told me, and just told me to continue reading which is annoying as h*ll
DaoistJhtAYc:Ik I’m late by a month but this is a girlxgirl story just in case you still wanted to know 🤔🤷♂️
So far the author only shown well honestly just one of her relationships if we’re being honest 🤔 the relationship she had with one of the Greek goddesses while in Ancient Greece was thoroughly talked about but the one she’s in now with some woman called Selene honesty just popped up when she author switched back to the POV of the present time instead of the past and I honestly have no idea who she is but I think it’s the Selene from the X-men, honestly not sure considering she is barely talked about since she popped up 🤔🤷♂️
ArtoriaPendragon_:Not really, and even after asking the author multiple times they never told me, and just told me to continue reading which is annoying as h*ll
DaoistJhtAYc:So far the author only shown well honestly just one of her relationships if we’re being honest 🤔 the relationship she had with one of the Greek goddesses while in Ancient Greece was thoroughly talked about but the one she’s in now with some woman called Selene honesty just popped up when she author switched back to the POV of the present time instead of the past and I honestly have no idea who she is but I think it’s the Selene from the X-men, honestly not sure considering she is barely talked about since she popped up 🤔🤷♂️
The mc encountered Selene when she went to Rome for killing some vampires (in a flashback), then they probably got together or something
DaoistJhtAYc:So far the author only shown well honestly just one of her relationships if we’re being honest 🤔 the relationship she had with one of the Greek goddesses while in Ancient Greece was thoroughly talked about but the one she’s in now with some woman called Selene honesty just popped up when she author switched back to the POV of the present time instead of the past and I honestly have no idea who she is but I think it’s the Selene from the X-men, honestly not sure considering she is barely talked about since she popped up 🤔🤷♂️
Ik but it really explains nothing about their relationship nor how they got together..heck it doesn’t even give context about why they started liking each other nor how or why they fell in love 🤷♂️🤷♂️ Also there is no dating period shown like her first relationship the author had her in, it shows how they met and then zooms to the present where they have been together for a long period of time already
Ashashashasha_bone:The mc encountered Selene when she went to Rome for killing some vampires (in a flashback), then they probably got together or something
DaoistJhtAYc:Ik but it really explains nothing about their relationship nor how they got together..heck it doesn’t even give context about why they started liking each other nor how or why they fell in love 🤷♂️🤷♂️ Also there is no dating period shown like her first relationship the author had her in, it shows how they met and then zooms to the present where they have been together for a long period of time already
its like asking these authors if its harem or not and ask you to keep reading to find out instant turn off for me
ArtoriaPendragon_:Not really, and even after asking the author multiple times they never told me, and just told me to continue reading which is annoying as h*ll