Review Detail of Runway_mistcat in I Reincarnated as a Pokemon

From the start when your reading it you can see the quality of the writing itd not bad but it's not good it could use some more work, and how we got off of how the MC became a pokemon was weak you start off with mc introducing himself than later his best friend then goes to the mall and dies that needs more detail into it, suddenly right after the MC dies he meets a God without any explanation then sends him to pokemon world, and more into it obviously I'm not going into this very much I'm just telling off. [ for the author ] this is by no means disrespect this story is better than most of stories please don't get angry in all I was just saying it needs improvement but not major, other tham that have a good day🙂