Review Detail of BukanOrang in GoT: The Black Wolf of Winterfell

The beginning is a bit illogical and seems absurd knowing the kingdom building was too fast and the age of him doing all of wonderous things was inappropriate. Well, what can I say, it's fantasy fanfic of course. But as soon as he grew up the plot compensate itself, it gets better but the thing was I can't seem to move on from the introduction and it affected me reading the rest of the chapters 😭. Great concept by the way, not many ASOIAF fanfic choose a pre-canon timeline. I say again, it's too fast, it might better if just started from his teenage years while having a bit of flashback of his childhood. Uh, one more, he seems born with no gifts or something but he just being godlike for the rest of the fic. Sorry, I hope that was only me who felt that or I might just skipped some things while reading it.