Review Detail of KiaoSuvan in Order c.c.

The Premise of this story is kind of a weird mix that somehow work. there is some Grammar mistake and I think some Analogy doesn't actually fit in with the context of some scene but it is a minor problem for the author is able to paint a clear image of the scene and character and tell a unique and coherence matter which for me is the most important things. The story is engaging and I can easily remember Character and I now want to see what's going to happen next! Good job!